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Old 09-11-2006, 01:08 PM   #1
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Simple Pleasures

Simple Pleasures by G.W. North

I left my house by the back door
to peruse through my late garden.
I had noticed on an earlier day
a fallen ear of corn,
hacked from its stalk by some impatient pest
that had nibbled such a small section
a few tiny bites of too young kernels
and had ruined the promise of a perfect ear of corn.

I walked the corn rows, eyeing the ground,
and spied another would-be star
lying on the ground
with a few small nibbles of too young kernels
I sighed at the sight and shook my head

Turning my body completly opposite
my back to the corn,
I beheld the graceful sprawl of tomato plants
that grew at their peak, in the dusk of summer.
From the branches sprouted a myriad of yellow blossoms
each eagerly awaiting the touch of honey bees
that were few to be found,
most sleeping,
prepaired for a long winter.

And the fully grown, and half grown tomatoes
that hung from the sturdy green branches
or sat on the ground
called out to me, the late gardner
here I am, almost perfect
another frost-free night is all I need.
Pick me tommorow, or the next day.
For you I will be perfect.

I went out the next day,
and the next day again
and the tomatoes had fulfilled their promise.
The skins were blemished,
as all perfect tomato skins are,
and with a deep crimson blush
with only the tiniest hint of orange
kissing at the juncture between the stem and the fruit.

I carefully gathered these prizes
worth more than gold, or even gasolene.
Bacon fried to that just right state.
Lettuce torn by hand decorated grand bread slices
along with mayonaise and pepper.
The the tomato was washed and sliced
and carefully laid atop the green lettuce leaves
followed by the bacon.

Those tomatoes, late and rare, promised to me
a flavor worth the hours of weeding,
of preparing the soil,
of waiting and watching.
This experience was enjoyed by my wife
and by my daughter, but not enjoyed as much
as by the gardener who had planted the vines late
and cared for them,
and who waited patiently.

Oh tomatoes can be had by the bushel,
red and perfect in form and color
with nary a blemish.
And they can be sliced and made
into some semblance of the humble blt.
But they will never compare
with the bright and perfect flavor
of those blemished, late, and love tomatoes
that I picked yesterday, in September.

And there are more calling to me
just another week. Give me just another week.
And I will be perfect, with blemishes, and flavor,
and a kiss of orange where the fruit meets the stem.
And maybe a few ears of corn will be ripe, and perfect too.

Author: Robert J. Flowers (Goodweed of the North)


This is the first free-verse, non-rhyming poem I have ever written.
Don't know if it was written according to the rules of poetry. But every word of it describes my experience over the last few days with my late garden and is true.

I usualy write poetry with strong meter and rhyme. I like that kind of poetry. I like reading it. So this one, though I enjoyed writing it, well, it is what it is. Hope you enjoyed some of my experience, placed on paper.

Seeeeeeya; Goodweed of the North

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Old 09-11-2006, 01:17 PM   #2
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Thanks Goodweed!!! I have saved it.
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Old 09-11-2006, 03:11 PM   #3
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Kudos, I enjoyed it !
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goodweed, thanks, that is beautiful!
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Old 09-12-2006, 10:23 PM   #5
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Goodweed - a lovely poem which could inspire a whole load of new posts!
For example:
I stepped out into the back garden this morning, around 7.15am. The sun filtered through the Avocado branches, the Ciskadees were screaming their early morning calls and the parakeets were belting across the sky in their usual impatient way. Two of our tortoises lumbered across the lawn in search of lettuce, or some left over fruit. There was not a breath of air.
To my delight I noticed the baby carrot seedlings and the lettuce had finally broken though the earth. Mmmm. A nice cup of tea would be good right now...
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Thank you.

Goodweed..

I could picture what you were saying.
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Old 09-13-2006, 11:17 AM   #7
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then let's do it. Let's offer this as the beginning post of a poetry invitational. But I think the poems should all have to do with food is some way. It could be about growing it, or preparimg it, or enjoying it with family and/or freinds.

The poem could be about how some dish looked, or the perfect presentation. Or it could be about a favorite dining experience in a great restaurant, or even truck stop cafe.

I think this could be fun. So I invite everyone who would share thier experiences through the written word. And don't worry whether or not yiu are an accomplished writer. That's not what this would be about. It would be about sharing a bit of your life, a snapshot in time. In fact, that would be a good name for this post, Snapshots in time.

Oh, and thanks for the great responces. I' glad that my snapshot touched you.

Seeeeeeya; Goodweed of the North
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